kookookitty	ginduf@gmail.com	2007-04-25	ID: 758
i read this a while ago and i had assumed that i had reviewed it... i assumed wrong! i am now taking steps necessary to correct that grave error. the fight and flight was exciting, i felt for the characters, i felt kagome's exausted and cramping muscles as she was running, her compassion and pain as she attempted to aid the kitsune, i felt yash's worry, concern and greif looking for her and assuming the worst. one would only hope that he expends as much energy in his attempts to find her 'remains' as he did the two times he believed kikyo had died. i am intreiged and i eagerly await your next installment. thank you, ginny

polkadot13		2007-06-04	ID: 842
Your story is wonderful! I can't wait to see what else happens! I hope that you update again soon. Till then!

Kim	kimberlyannpangilinan@yahoo.com	2007-08-02	ID: 897
Yep, definitly maim and kill you ^_^ please update sooN! and I don't mean just the edited versions and whatnot! Please?! C'mon, have pity on readers who wait avidly for the next chapter! I wanna know what happens next! See yah!! P.s Oh, and I'm guessing a fair number of writers share what you feel with their stories and chapters, but if you feel that way, then it should make you more determined to write a chapter that you think is better than the last! Its natural, so don't worry bout it! Keep it up, readers are rooting for yah!! ^_^

Moonbug	moonbug_1@juno.com	2007-08-29	ID: 913
This story has potential but you tend to flip back and forth through memories and what's going on at the moment with out any way to tell the difference it gets confusing at times other then that this is off to a decent start